We were ready. James, Ian and I headed out the door and into the wilderness. Suddenly,
Ian pushed me into the woods and we disappeared into the night. Ian knew James and I
were scared of the dark, so why did he do it? “James,” I shouted, “Where are you!” There
was no reply. Did Ian push James into the woods? I wasn’t sure as I couldn’t see anything.
CRASH! “Who’s there?” I questioned. No reply again. I was so petrified. I pulled my gun out
of my pocket and was ready to shoot, but should I really do this?...
Freya, you certainly created suspense in this week's 100 WC. Keep writing!
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Team 100
Illinois, USA