The children were recently asked to write a diary entry about what it would be like to live on the moon. Joseph's example was very detailed and wonderful to read. We are going to try and make a cluffduff in real life. Maybe it will be the next big thing!
Welcome to the Year Six website. On this website, we will be sharing examples of our children's work. This page is a workshop containing examples of learning in action. The work will not be the children's 'final draft’.
Thursday, 30 April 2020
Wednesday, 29 April 2020
What would happen if the government started to ration electricity?
For their writing task, Year Six were asked to "Write about what would happen if the government started to ration electricity."
This task came from the BBC & Twinkl Busy Box Challenge Cards.
Below is writing by Isabel, Aoife, Emma, Joseph & Mia. You'll see each child has chosen their own approach and style.
Tuesday, 28 April 2020
Write about what would happen if the government started to ration electricity by Liam
For their writing task, Year Six were asked to "Write about what would happen if the government started to ration electricity."
This task came from the BBC & Twinkl Busy Box Challenge Cards.
Below is Liam's writing. He's thought about what to write, presented it in an original way and used a huge range of punctuation!
Monday, 27 April 2020
The Mirror
She had found it lying alone, deserted, abandoned in the attic. After making the discovery, Anna had gazed and marvelled at it for some time. Where had it come from? Why had no dust settled upon it, as it had done over everything else that resided in her attic? A layer of the thick dust blanketed the attic floor, and as the sunlight glared through the attic windows, the dust particles yet to settle were illuminated as they hovered in the stuffy air. Yet, the mirror looked flawless, untouched by age, not a finger print in sight.
Anna propped the mirror up against one of the thick, timber beams that jutted from the attic floor. Settling down into a comfortable position, she tentatively placed a finger against the glass…
We received many wonderful and spooky stories. If you are feeling brave enough, here are a selection of some of them:
Abi K |
Aimee T |
Alex A |
Enya O |
Maya R |
Mia A |
Sunday, 26 April 2020
Alice's Baking
As part of her daily maths work, Alice did some making. The kitchen would be most impressed with the way she's tried to replicate the ones we serve in school!
Friday, 24 April 2020
Thursday, 23 April 2020
Tuesday, 21 April 2020
Joseph's Week #30 100 Word Challenge Entry (The Park)
For today's Year Six writing task, they were asked to write an entry for this week's 100 Word Challenge. Below is the prompt the children were given and Joseph's response.
Barney's Week #30 100 Word Challenge Entry (The Last Wave)
For today's Year Six writing task, they were asked to write an entry for this week's 100 Word Challenge. Below is the prompt the children were given and Barney's response.
The Last Wave
This was it, the last wave of zombies coming straight towards them. Now it was Thor’s time to shine after everybody else.“They’re coming” he bellowed in his deep war voice.
“Sir, I think we shou-” replied Steve but he was cut off.“It doesn’t matter what you think, does it.”
Now the zombies were less than 50 metres away and were coming like a train hurtling into a station.“Launch the cannons!” demanded Thor.They launched the cannons and took out about 100 of the lifeless but they were still coming straight towards the life full and very quick...
Tuesday, 7 April 2020
Monday, 6 April 2020
Friday, 3 April 2020
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